【已翻译】北川中学高二学生献给老师同学的诗

淡水河边

各位，这首诗很感人，是北川一个同学做的，我想做成视频，朗诵的录音以及图片、影象资料我已经准备好了，就差这首诗的翻译了，劳驾了！下面为诗的内容，有点长！

我最爱的人
北川中学高二学生

2008年5月12日
让人刻骨铭心的一天
2008年5月12 日
让人永生难忘的一天

这天，大地摇晃，山崩地裂
这天，家没了，学校没了，同学不在了
这天，哭喊声，尖叫生，轰鸣声，交织成一片

死神狞笑着向我们走来
他充满血腥的魔爪，
带走了多少我熟悉的心跳

他们离开时恐惧的眼神
让我忘记了如何微笑

相处的日子太短
以至我还没来得及深深地了解你
灾难来得太突然
以至我还没来得及说一声我爱你

但是再多的哀伤再多的泪水
也无法改变既成的悲剧
我最爱的人
此时此刻我是多么多么地想你

泪眼朦胧中
我看见你从远方向我走来

我急切地向你挥手
你却突然转身疾走
我向你追去
你却越走越远

我最爱的人
此时此刻你到底在何方

天空依然湛蓝
阳光依旧灿烂
却没有你的笑脸

我知道
你一定是最美的天堂

我最爱的人
在睡梦中
我一遍遍呼喊你的名字
你却隐而不答

你是如此淘气
让我寻觅不到隐藏至深的你

我最爱的人
我何曾想离开你
当梦被阻断时
曾经的山盟海誓依旧相依

你听得到我这样遥远的呼唤吗
你听得出我的声音是如此急切绝望 难过吗

昨天
我们还欢声笑语
昨天
我们还谈天论地
昨天
灾难离我们似乎还很遥远

我们是娇艳的花朵
正茁壮成长
为了明天的梦想成长

可是我们的回忆被深深地埋进土里
我们的伤痕也深深地烙在心里

眼睁睁地着朋友死去
眼睁睁地看着家园成为废墟

娇艳的花朵已经枯萎
可爱的你们闭上了眼睛

我们收拾好残破的行囊
背井离乡
没有人愿意去触碰那些伤疤
真的太疼了

疼得让人忘了自己该如何去走下一步路
疼得让人歇斯底里却又不知道如何表达
疼得让人掐了自己一次又一次却忍着眼泪说不疼
疼得让人用微笑去掩饰所有废墟的存在

可是我们还得继续
用坚强勇气信心继续

亲爱的同学们
我们将更坚强地活下去

因为我们知道
我们知道
我们肩上还有你们的梦

大地的震颤
怎能埋葬瑰丽的梦想
命运的挑战
怎能折断飞翔的翅膀
泪水的决堤
怎能迷茫你我的未来

呼吸!我努力的呼吸
因为，我还活着

曾经可怕的地震来了又去了
但曾经那双渴望的眼睛
仍闪烁着北极星的光芒

插上翅膀
挥掉泪水
一如既往的飞翔
飞翔

民族的血泪史正在因你的苦难而演化
中华儿女也正因为你的挫折而挺直了腰板

汶川 北川 青川
地震了！
震不垮三川的根基
地震了！
震不倒三川的脊梁
地震了！
震不毁三川的精神

天降大任于中国
让我们昂起倔强的头颅
挺起不屈的脊梁
向前向前再向前！

翻译见 板凳 #5 #6

ltbriar

嘩.. 老天, 那麼長, 我不用睡了. 讓賢, 因明天要早起.

Nicolle

To the ones that I love with heart and soul
Students of Grade 2 of Beichuan Secondary school


May 12th, 2008
The day that people will remember with deep gratitude
May 12th, 2008
The day that people will never ever forget
That day, mother earth quaked,
the mountain collapsed and the ground upheaval


That day, home is gone, school is gone, classmates are gone
That day, crying, screaming and roaring were mixed together
God of death walked to us with fleering
He is with bloody talons
Took away so many heartthrobs that I am so familiar with
The fear in their eyes when they left with
Made me forget how to smile


Too short to stay with you
I even do not have the chance to tell you that I love you
But no matter how much the sadness and tears are
Can never ever change the tragedy

The ones that I love most
How much that I miss you at the moment
With the eyes clouded with tears
I see you walking to me from far far away
I wave my hand to you anxiously
But you suddenly turn around and walk away
I run after you
But you leave me farther and farther


The ones that I love most
Where are you now
The sky is still blue
The sun is still shining
But there is no your smiling face any more
I know
You must be in the most beautiful Heaven
The ones that I love most
In the dream
I call your name once and once again
But you don’t answer
You are always so naughty
That I can not find you coz you hide so deeply


The ones that I love most
I have never ever want to leave you
When the dream is blocked
The vow still stays
Can you hear my calling from far far away
can you recognize how desperate I am through my voice


Yesterday
We were still laughing
Yesterday
We were still talking
Yesterday
Disaster seems still so far from us
We are the beautiful flowers
Which are thriving
For the dream of tomorrow

But the memory of us has been buried deeply in the soil
The lasting hurt has been scarred in heart
Looking on the friends die away helplessly
Looking on the homes gone helplessly
Beautiful flowers have been withered away
The lovely friends have closed eyes
We have done with our klunky duds
Leaving our native place


No one wants to touch those scars
Coz it really hurts
The hurt makes people don’t know how to move on
The hurt makes people desperate but don’t know how to express
The hurt makes me pinch myself once and once again but still holds the tears and saying it does not hurt
The hurt makes people hide the existence of the relic by smile
But we need to keep going
With the courage and belief

Dear classmates
I need to be even more stronger
Coz we know
We know
Your dreams are on our shoulders
Violently shaking mother earth
can not bury the beautiful dreams
Challenge of life
Can not break the flying wings
Outburst of tears
Can not confuse our future

Breath! I breath so hard
Coz I am still alive
The horrible earthquake came and gone
But those eyes with desires
Still shines with rays of lights from Polaris
Take on the wings
Say goodbye to the tears

Fly as always
Fly…
The national history of blood tears is evolved by your tribulation
Chinese is even more stronger because of your frustration

Wenchuan Beichuan Qingchuan
Earthquake!
Can not break the root of them
Earthquake!
Can not break the back of them
Earthquake!
Can not destroy the spirit of them

Great mission to China
Let us hold up our sperevering head
Let us straight our cast-iron back
Move forward! Move forward! Move forward!


PS, 好长 滴----诗啊~~ 读下来是需要超好滴肺活量滴~~~  :L
高手给改改哈, 老女人要下班廖~

淡水河边

Nicolle,Thanks a lot!

dakelv

感谢Nicolle的翻译，我就来个马后炮吧。下面蓝色的句子是我对其前一行句子的修改建议。看得比较粗，所以建议也可能有不对的地方。


To the ones that I love with heart and soul
To our Most Beloved
Students of Grade 2 of Beichuan Secondary school



May 12th, 2008
The day that people will remember with deep gratitude
The day that will be engraved in people's hearts 【从原文看，这种“刻骨铭心”并不全指感激之心，所以用“gratitued"窃以为不妥。】
May 12th, 2008
The day that people will never ever forget
That day, mother earth quaked,
the mountain collapsed and the ground upheaval
Mountains collapsed and grounds shattered 【Upheaval 是名词】


That day, home is gone, school is gone, classmates are gone
On that day, homes were gone, schools were gone, and classmates were gone
That day, crying, screaming and roaring were mixed together
God of death walked to us with fleering
He is with bloody talons
His bloody claws
Took away so many heartthrobs that I am so familiar with
The fear in their eyes when they left with
Made me forget how to smile


Too short to stay with you
I even do not have the chance to tell you that I love you
But no matter how much the sadness and tears are
Sadness and tears, no matter how much they are
Can never ever change the tragedy
Can never ever revert the tragedy

The ones that I love most
How much that I miss you at the moment
With the eyes clouded with tears
I see you walking to me from far far away
I wave my hand to you anxiously
But you suddenly turn around and walk away
I run after you
But you leave me farther and farther


The ones that I love most
The ones that I love the most
Where are you now
The sky is still blue
The sun is still shining
But there is no your smiling face any more
But your smiling face is no more
I know
You must be in the most beautiful Heaven
The ones that I love most
The ones that I love the most
In the dream
I call your name once and once again
But you don’t answer
You are always so naughty
That I can not find you coz you hide so deeply
That I can not find you because you hide so deeply


The ones that I love most
The ones that I love the most
I have never ever want to leave you
When the dream is blocked
When the dream is interrupted
The vow still stays
Can you hear my calling from far far away
can you recognize how desperate I am through my voice


Yesterday
We were still laughing
Yesterday
We were still talking
Yesterday
Disaster seems still so far from us
Disaster seemed still so far from us
We are the beautiful flowers
We were the beautiful flowers
Which are thriving
Thriving
For the dream of tomorrow

But the memory of us has been buried deeply in the soil
The lasting hurt has been scarred in heart
And our hearts are deeply scarred
Looking on the friends die away helplessly
Looking on the homes gone helplessly
Beautiful flowers have been withered away
The lovely friends have closed eyes
We have done with our klunky duds
We had to pack up 【这里似乎不需要直译】
Leaving our native place


No one wants to touch those scars
Coz it really hurts
Because they really hurt 【前面的scars是复数】
The hurt makes people don’t know how to move on
They made people uncertain about how to move on
The hurt makes people desperate but don’t know how to express
They made people desperate yet speechless
The hurt makes me pinch myself once and once again but still holds the tears and saying it does not hurt
They made me pinch myself once and once again but still hold the tears and say it does not hurt 【说实话这句原文我读不懂】
The hurt makes people hide the existence of the relic by smile
They made people try to forget about the rubbles with  smile 【relic是遗址，不是废墟】
But we need to keep going
With the courage and belief

Dear classmates
I need to be even more stronger
I need to be even  stronger
Coz we know
Because we know
We know
Your dreams are on our shoulders
Violently shaking mother earth
The violent shakes of the mother earth
can not bury the beautiful dreams
Challenge of life
Can not break the flying wings
Outburst of tears
Can not confuse our future
Can not cloud our future

Breath! I breath so hard
Coz I am still alive
Because I am still alive
The horrible earthquake came and gone
But those eyes with desires
But those eager eyes
Still shines with rays of lights from Polaris
Are still radiant, just like the polaris light
Take on the wings
Extend your wings
Say goodbye to the tears

Fly as always
Fly…
The national history of blood tears is evolved by your tribulation
The national history of blood and tears is evolving with your tribulation
Chinese is even more stronger because of your frustration
Chinese is even stronger because of your hardships

Wenchuan Beichuan Qingchuan
Earthquake!
Can not break the root of them
Can not break their foundations
Earthquake!
Can not break the back of them
Can not break their spines 【这里直译脊梁为spine】
Earthquake!
Can not destroy the spirit of them
Can not destroy their spirits
Great mission to China
Great missions befall China
Let us hold up our sperevering head
Let us hold up our heads high
Let us straight our cast-iron back
Let us straighten our iron-cast spines
Move forward! Move forward! Move forward!

[ 本帖最后由 dakelv 于 2008-6-6 11:33 编辑 ]

ltbriar

To our DearestStudents of Grade 2 of Beichuan Secondary school
May12th, 2008
The day that will be engraved in people's hearts
May 12th, 2008
The day that people will never ever forget

On that day, mother earthquaked,
Mountains collapsed and grounds crumbled
On that day, homes, schools and classmates were gone
On that day, cries, screams and roars all blended together
Spiritof Death approached us, fleering
His bloody claws
Took away so many heartthrobs that I am so familiar with
The terror left in their eyes when they ceased
Made me forget how to smile

Too short our acquaintance
I don't even have time to know you better
Too sudden the disaster (好像漏了兩句)
I hardly have the chance to tell you that I love you
Sadness and tears, no matter how much (they are 可以省, 因為是詩)
Can never ever revert the tragic event

My dearest fellow
How much I miss you all (此時此刻就不必翻)
With eyes clouded with tears (articles 不必用)

I see you walking towards me afar
I wave to you anxiously
But you suddenly turn and dash away
I run after you
But you get farther and farther away

My dearest fellow
Where are you now
The skyis still blue
The sun is still shiny
But no where is your smiling face
I know You must be in the most beautiful Heaven
My dearest fellow
In my dreams(只能是我的, 而且應該是眾數)
I repeat your name over and over
But there is no answer
You are always so naughty
That I cannot find you as you hide so deep (deep不形容動詞, 而是in a place 被省了)

My dearest fellow
Never had I wanted to part with you
When the dream was shattered
The vow shall stay
Can you hear my call across the distance
can you recognize how desperate is my voice

Yesterday
We were still laughing
Yesterday
We were still talking
Yesterday
Disaster seemed so very far away
We were the beautiful flowers
Thriving
For dreams of tomorrow

But our memory now buried deeply in the soil
And our hearts, deeply scarred (are 可以省)
Helplessly watching our friends swifted away
Helplessly watching our homes crushed
Beautiful flowers had withered
Our lovely friends closed their eyes
We have to pack up
Leaving our home, our land

No one wants to touch those scars
Because they really hurt
They made one lost track of how to move on
They made one hysteric yet speechless
The hurt made one pinch oneself over and over, hold back the tears,"no, it's not hurting"
Theymade one try to forget about the rubbles with smile
But we need moving on
With courage and faith (article 不用)

Dear classmates
We will live on stronger
Because we know
We know
Your dreams now become our loads
The brutal shakes of Mother Earth
cannot bury our beautiful dreams
Challenge of life
Cannot cripple flying wings
Outburst of tears
Cannot blur our future

Breath! I breath so hard
Because I am still alive
The horrible earthquake came and gone
But those eager eyes
Are still radiant, just like the polaris light
Extend your wings
Say goodbye to the tears

Fly as always
Fly…

The nationalhistory of blood and tears is evolving with your tribulation
Chinese will be even stronger because of your hardship (I think hardship can be used as a general term here)
Wenchuan Beichuan Qingchuan
Earthquake!
Cannot uproot them
Earthquake!
Cannot break their spines
Earthquake!
Cannot destroy their spirits

Great missions befall China
Let us hold our heads up high
Let us straighten our unyielding spines
Move on! Move on! Move on!  (覺得 move on比較適合恢復心情向前行, move forward 有點命令式的感覺)


[ 本帖最后由 ltbriar 于 2008-6-7 04:19 编辑 ]

淡水河边

谢谢大家，真诚地感谢