|
馬後再馬後
To our DearestStudents of Grade 2 of Beichuan Secondary school
May12th, 2008
The day that will be engraved in people's hearts
May 12th, 2008
The day that people will never ever forget
On that day, mother earthquaked,
Mountains collapsed and grounds crumbled
On that day, homes, schools and classmates were gone
On that day, cries, screams and roars all blended together
Spiritof Death approached us, fleering
His bloody claws
Took away so many heartthrobs that I am so familiar with
The terror left in their eyes when they ceased
Made me forget how to smile
Too short our acquaintance
I don't even have time to know you better
Too sudden the disaster (好像漏了兩句)
I hardly have the chance to tell you that I love you
Sadness and tears, no matter how much (they are 可以省, 因為是詩)
Can never ever revert the tragic event
My dearest fellow
How much I miss you all (此時此刻就不必翻)
With eyes clouded with tears (articles 不必用)
I see you walking towards me afar
I wave to you anxiously
But you suddenly turn and dash away
I run after you
But you get farther and farther away
My dearest fellow
Where are you now
The skyis still blue
The sun is still shiny
But no where is your smiling face
I know You must be in the most beautiful Heaven
My dearest fellow
In my dreams(只能是我的, 而且應該是眾數)
I repeat your name over and over
But there is no answer
You are always so naughty
That I cannot find you as you hide so deep (deep不形容動詞, 而是in a place 被省了)
My dearest fellow
Never had I wanted to part with you
When the dream was shattered
The vow shall stay
Can you hear my call across the distance
can you recognize how desperate is my voice
Yesterday
We were still laughing
Yesterday
We were still talking
Yesterday
Disaster seemed so very far away
We were the beautiful flowers
Thriving
For dreams of tomorrow
But our memory now buried deeply in the soil
And our hearts, deeply scarred (are 可以省)
Helplessly watching our friends swifted away
Helplessly watching our homes crushed
Beautiful flowers had withered
Our lovely friends closed their eyes
We have to pack up
Leaving our home, our land
No one wants to touch those scars
Because they really hurt
They made one lost track of how to move on
They made one hysteric yet speechless
The hurt made one pinch oneself over and over, hold back the tears,"no, it's not hurting"
Theymade one try to forget about the rubbles with smile
But we need moving on
With courage and faith (article 不用)
Dear classmates
We will live on stronger
Because we know
We know
Your dreams now become our loads
The brutal shakes of Mother Earth
cannot bury our beautiful dreams
Challenge of life
Cannot cripple flying wings
Outburst of tears
Cannot blur our future
Breath! I breath so hard
Because I am still alive
The horrible earthquake came and gone
But those eager eyes
Are still radiant, just like the polaris light
Extend your wings
Say goodbye to the tears
Fly as always
Fly…
The nationalhistory of blood and tears is evolving with your tribulation
Chinese will be even stronger because of your hardship (I think hardship can be used as a general term here)
Wenchuan Beichuan Qingchuan
Earthquake!
Cannot uproot them
Earthquake!
Cannot break their spines
Earthquake!
Cannot destroy their spirits
Great missions befall China
Let us hold our heads up high
Let us straighten our unyielding spines
Move on! Move on! Move on! (覺得 move on比較適合恢復心情向前行, move forward 有點命令式的感覺)
[ 本帖最后由 ltbriar 于 2008-6-7 04:19 编辑 ] |
评分
-
2
查看全部评分
-
|